tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post3302008639923270622..comments2023-09-01T09:05:27.990-05:00Comments on The Moon Topples: Current Novel Excerpt: Adventure!The Moon Toppleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12717446064777879248noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-71485722716785303502007-04-20T06:45:00.000-05:002007-04-20T06:45:00.000-05:00Oh no keep posting the excerpts. I think that peop...Oh no keep posting the excerpts. I think that people are often worried about saying what they think if it's not gushingley positive. Do you know what I mean? But I think that if you're going to post stuff then you want some genuine criticism (constructive of course). No?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08533913253403252799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-79538365293237572172007-04-19T17:17:00.000-05:002007-04-19T17:17:00.000-05:00Ver: I will post more excerpts. I've been a bit wo...Ver: I will post more excerpts. I've been a bit worried, though, as this has been up for a while with no one saying anything.<BR/><BR/>The pacing thing may also just be the first-draftiness. I'll have to look more closely.The Moon Toppleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12717446064777879248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-2357876575555584982007-04-19T07:51:00.000-05:002007-04-19T07:51:00.000-05:00This is kind of different to the other excerpts, t...This is kind of different to the other excerpts, the pace is slightly different, in keeping with him having an adventure I suppose. I'm very intrigued, keep posting excerpts.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08533913253403252799noreply@blogger.com