tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post3634099870464726033..comments2023-09-01T09:05:27.990-05:00Comments on The Moon Topples: GBA(s)FC (Growth) Entry #6The Moon Toppleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12717446064777879248noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-53173141798186044812007-05-16T12:19:00.000-05:002007-05-16T12:19:00.000-05:00Thanks to all for commenting on my story, very hel...Thanks to all for commenting on my story, very helpful.<BR/>I am impressed with the level of writing entered. Wonderful, wonderful stories.Wisewebwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15281689872840844191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-7815532531307851522007-05-16T08:13:00.000-05:002007-05-16T08:13:00.000-05:00The Jury says..."...writing flows, good structurin...The Jury says...<BR/><BR/>"...writing flows, good structuring that flowed through to a wry ending. The speech parts need seeing to but apart from that this was good, solid writing that made every word mean something."The Moon Toppleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12717446064777879248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-38158242460493934782007-05-14T13:56:00.000-05:002007-05-14T13:56:00.000-05:00Unrequited love is one of the saddest ways to hurt...Unrequited love is one of the saddest ways to hurt. A fine story.<BR/><BR/>I met Father Daniel Berrigan once, and can understand how a woman could fall in love with a priest.heartinsanfranciscohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07535397382991383931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-16955632195036170972007-05-14T08:13:00.000-05:002007-05-14T08:13:00.000-05:00This was interesting. Nice job of describing the w...This was interesting. Nice job of describing the world inside her head. Made me wonder more of who these people were, what they were thinking, what they were feeling.<BR/><BR/>Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-63692043629287556862007-05-13T18:07:00.000-05:002007-05-13T18:07:00.000-05:00This was lovely. Comic yet sad.This was lovely. Comic yet sad.S. Kearneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03976476273818980832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-17198836204731377232007-05-12T10:29:00.000-05:002007-05-12T10:29:00.000-05:00Very poignant. I can feel her waiting there. As ...Very poignant. I can feel her waiting there. As much as I don't want to believe it, I think he hasn't chosen her. Very painful.<BR/><BR/>Very well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-8303920721187528952007-05-12T06:35:00.000-05:002007-05-12T06:35:00.000-05:00Just wanted the author to know, this secured one o...Just wanted the author to know, this secured one of my votes. There's just not many comments going on with this contest, which is a bummer, so I wanted to pass that along.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-88987891834261051402007-05-08T15:06:00.000-05:002007-05-08T15:06:00.000-05:00This reminds me of The Mermaid Chair for some reas...This reminds me of The Mermaid Chair for some reason.<BR/><BR/>I feel for Maggie. There is something very accessable about this. Nice writing.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33218373.post-48820861827302014282007-05-06T17:40:00.000-05:002007-05-06T17:40:00.000-05:00As a lover of Maeve Binchy and sweet, unraunchy ta...As a lover of Maeve Binchy and sweet, unraunchy tales, I cannot tell you how much I adored this. Adored doesn't quite describe it. Loved and adored!Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.com