Monday, March 12, 2007

Monday morning haiku - March 12

Three at a bus stop
All eyebrows and attitude
They squint in the sun

4 comments:

Minty said...

M-

I like this haiku. It seems like the writer felt very lonely and outside of things.

Of course, I could just be projecting....

-Minty

swimmer6foot4 said...

In particular I envy you
for penning the line:
"All eyebrows and attitude".

Zinnia Cyclamen said...

I've seen those three at bus stops many times.

The Moon Topples said...

Minty: Project away.

Swimmer: I've actualy been sitting on that line, hoping it would fit into a song. I was delighted to find that it had the right number os syllables to fit in a haiku.

Zinnia: Yeah, they're always there, in one way or another.