Monday, April 16, 2007

Oh, look, she creeping over

a pome on my one (1) female cat

Oh, look, she creeping over
with husky, noisy throat
no red but still she ginger
no dense and so she float.

My frowny sounds astound her
of tossy, turny bed
she skitter out of earshot
to eat a book instead.

12 comments:

Reading the Signs said...

Your cat is talented - please tell her from me to keep writing.

Is this the first day of the rest of your life, so to speak? Congratulations! (if so)

Minx said...

My cat he singing up a storm
of wind and rain and hail
call a lady to his lust
with sexy catty wail

She no come to fill his need
her think him quite a bore
and leave him on his lonely wall
to find the tom next door

Liz said...

My cat...

oh wait, I don't have a cat because my landlord hates them. Hmm. Your cat sounds like an insomniac.

The Moon Topples said...

Seems I need to clarify. My cat did not write this pome. The lead-in should have read "on" rather than "of."

Correcting that now...

RTS: Soon, soon. They keep delaying the rest of my life. I shall apply your congratulations at the appropriate time.

Minx: Are you hitting on my cat? Spayed, I'm afraid.

Liz: She does indeed, but that's really my affliction.

Leesa said...

I love the last line!

Open Grove Claudia said...

I saw your post on guilty without explanation and thought I should see what you were up to.

Sadly, I was not born with the poetry gene. Sing me a song? I get it. But... It's a rare disability but one none the less.

goodthomas said...

I like this Moon Tickley. It is fun and lyrical and fast.

Your poems are wonderful, Mr. T. However, I am glad your cat did not write this, for that would be too depressing, in comparison.

The Moon Topples said...

Leesa: Thanks. True story, sadly.

Open Grove Claudia: Welcome! I'm not quite as talented as HinSF, but I hope you've enjoyed stopping by anyway.

GT: Yeah, I kind of like this one, too. Good thing, since for some reason not writing it was keeping me awake. I agree it'd be depressing if written by an actualy cat.

Sundry said...

It's rather Jabberwokian, old son. Hats off to you, sir. A fine effort.

Zinnia Cyclamen said...

That made me giggle with recognition and delight.

Shameless said...

Gorgeous gorgeous. I read it out loud to Muffin.

The Moon Topples said...

Sundry: Thanks much. Jabberwocky wasn't in my mind, but it's a flattering comparison, so I'll take it.

Zinnia: Glad to make you giggle.

Shameless: Well? What did Muffin think?