Monday, August 13, 2007

Monday morning haiku - August 13

The human heartbeat
measured from the jugular
is never a waltz


Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

This is one I will remember, quite clever really.

Unknown said...

Oh I really like that, not that I know a waltz rhythm, but I just like the whole image. It evokes a lot.

Anonymous said...

I love this, Mr. Mack Tippies. Your haikus are great.

Hey you were tagged by HinSF -- check her out today, willya?

The Moon Topples said...

Marcia: Thankya. You are very kind.

Ver: 1-2-3, 1-2-3.

Amy: Been over and finally finished the exercise. Check it out, as you have been tagged as well.

Wanderlust Scarlett said...

What if one is dancing with death? Is it a waltz then?

Great haiku, I love this one.

Scarlett & V.

Crafty Green Poet said...

This is excellent..