Monday, March 05, 2007

Monday morning haiku - March 5

The peal of a bell
birds scatter, breaking cover
in the morning rain

5 comments:

Minty said...

I have Haiku envy...

The Moon Topples said...

Minty: The best way to cure haiku envy (provided you don't have toad foot on hand) is by writing haiku of your own.

goodthomas said...

I like this one a lot, Mr. T. Line #2 is a fave, very nice work.

heartinsanfrancisco said...

Lovely.

The Moon Topples said...

GT: Thanks muchly. I know you write a lot more poetry than I do, so your comment is appreciated.

HinSF: Thanks, and I kind of miss how you used to write better haiku in my comments. The ban is lifted, if you'd like to resume showing me up.