Monday, April 23, 2007

Monday morning haiku - April 23

A toast to your health!
Let us cast aside this feud!
...which cup is poisoned?

11 comments:

goodthomas said...

Oh good Moon Tripper, funny, funny stuff.

goodthomas said...

Oh and I love your flickering Flicker button. Very cool beans.

London Refugee said...

Dear Mr Moon,

New to blurgin' and I happenstanced upon your memorable blog.

Not one for haikus but this one is very wilty - as my youngest vagabond from heaven might comment.

May I entreat you to add Mr Richard Thompson, late of this isalnd parish, to your finely-tuned ears. Momentous songs and a cool guitar.

Best,
The Refugee

The Moon Topples said...

GT: Thanks you for your kindness and I'm sorry your beans weren't cooked properly.

LR: Well, welcome. Already a Richard Thompson fan, but maybe I'll spin something of his today to honor the spirit of your comment.

Will check out your blog soon, and hope to see you again.

Verilion said...

I think work has blurred my brain. Took me ages to get this. Duh!

Shameless said...

Oh deliciously wicked!

~*SilverNeurotic*~ said...

Haha, loved it.

Zinnia Cyclamen said...

An active voice in a haiku, now that's a GREAT idea. Haven't come across it before. Terrific.

The Moon Topples said...

Ver: Sure. Couldn't have anything to do with my clumsy execution. Must be you.

Shameless: I work hard for delicious. The wicked comes easy.

SilverN: Thanks!

Zinnia: Yes. Take that, ancient and beautiful art form! No mention of nature, either! In your face!

Verilion said...

Oh it was most definitely me! ( ;

heartinsanfrancisco said...

I simply love this!