Monday, September 15, 2008

Monday Morning Haiku - September 15

She has bread

Instantly, at the
mere sight of the old woman 
five hundred pigeons


Taffiny said...

but were the pigeons in flight or not? That is the thing.
Now I see her as the equivalent of, much different image.

Taffiny said...

Had she had bread the whole time? I don't recall that line when I read it the first time. Of course she still would have had the bread, I just would not have known it.

Very good then, they are friends of a sort, the old woman and the pigeons.

The Moon Topples said...

Taffy: She had bread the whole time. As it confused you, I shall not count this among my better haiku attempts.