The Moon Topples: Monday Morning Haiku

Monday, September 15, 2008

She has bread

Instantly, at the

mere sight of the old woman

five hundred pigeons

Taffiny said...: but were the pigeons in flight or not? That is the thing.
Now I see her as the equivalent of, much different image.; 9/15/2008 11:56 AM
Taffiny said...: Had she had bread the whole time? I don't recall that line when I read it the first time. Of course she still would have had the bread, I just would not have known it.

Very good then, they are friends of a sort, the old woman and the pigeons.; 9/26/2008 7:43 AM
The Moon Topples said...: Taffy: She had bread the whole time. As it confused you, I shall not count this among my better haiku attempts.; 9/29/2008 11:30 AM